According to the rubric above, what grade would you give this essay? Why?
4점 persuasive essay의 구조에 맞게 글을 썼기 때문입니다.
How does this essay need to improve to get a better grade?
전반적으로 괜찮지만 부분적으로 문법 오류가 보이는 것 같습니다.
Thesis
What is the thesis?
Language is the best tool for humans to survive and make society rather than any other things.
Is the thesis clear and debatable?
네
If you (The reviewer) wrote this essay, how would you have written the thesis?
pro
Any other thoughts?
전체적으로 괜찮지만 부분적으로 수정이 필요할 듯합니다.
Classical Argument
Can you easily identify the 5 parts of the classical argument? If no, what parts are missing?
네.
Does the introduction catch your attention? Does it comfortably lead to the thesis?
네.
Does the narration give all the necessary background information to understand the topic?
네.
Does the confirmation adequately support the thesis?
네.
Does the refutation and concession address a realistic counterpoint? Does it adequately dispute the counterpoint, or respond in a reasonable manner?
네.
Does the conclusion summarize the article and address the larger significance of the thesis?
잘 했다고 생각합니다.
What suggestions do you have for improving the classical argument structure?
구조 자체는 잘 맞게 썼네요.
Persuasion
When you started reading the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis?
찬성합니다.
When you finished the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis?
찬성합니다.
Research
Is the author using research effectively?
네.
Is the research from appropriate sources?
네.
Are the sources obvious?
네.
Are the pieces of evidence relevant to the thesis or essay?
네.
Are there any parts of the essay that need evidence to support the claims?
조사 면에서는 딱히 없는 것 같네요!