2 points - The first draft is thoughtful and a good start to an effective persuasive essay. It demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument.1 point - The student completes a first draft that demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument0 points - The first draft is inadequate
I think I deserve two points. It's because my first draft is quite thoughtful and shows good start
2) What did you do well?
I think my introduction and confirmation is good.
3) What could you have done better?
I would like to strengthen my narration but it's difficult.
4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?
I think it is confirmation.
5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?
May be narration?
6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better?
I would read the instruction for how to write the classical argument again.
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